[tsvwg] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9435 (8081)

Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Wed, 21 August 2024 09:45 UTC

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From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
To: "C. M. Heard" <heard@pobox.com>, Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zahed.sarker.ietf@gmail.com>
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Hi,

Actually valid editorial ones are accepted and presented as errata and applied in the html rendering with inline errata that can be found from the RFC-editor RFC page.
For example RFC 4960 (SCTP) has a number of errata where several are editorial: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/inline-errata/rfc4960.html

Cheers

Magnus

From: C. M. Heard <heard@pobox.com>
Date: Tuesday, 20 August 2024 at 16:33
To: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zahed.sarker.ietf@gmail.com>
Cc: touch@strayalpha.com <touch@strayalpha.com>, Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, angelos2225@hotmail.com <angelos2225@hotmail.com>, ana@erg.abdn.ac.uk <ana@erg.abdn.ac.uk>, r.secchi@abdn.ac.uk <r.secchi@abdn.ac.uk>, tsvwg@ietf.org <tsvwg@ietf.org>
Subject: [tsvwg] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9435 (8081)
In the case of an editorial erratum such as this, isn't the custom to accept the erratum but place it in a "hold for document update" status?

On Tue, Aug 20, 2024 at 6:56 AM Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zahed.sarker.ietf@gmail.com<mailto:zahed.sarker.ietf@gmail.com>> wrote:
Hi,

This has been reported as editorial hence RFC editor will handle this.

//Zahed

On Tue, 20 Aug 2024 at 15:40, touch@strayalpha.com<mailto:touch@strayalpha.com> <touch@strayalpha.com<mailto:touch@strayalpha.com>> wrote:
Hi, Gorry,

The correction is valid, but as you note not substantive.

Aren’t those still recordable as “editorial” rather than “technical”, though?

Editorial
a spelling, grammar, punctuation, or syntax error that does not affect the technical meaning

Joe

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On Aug 20, 2024, at 6:33 AM, Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk<mailto:gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>> wrote:

On 17/08/2024 06:17, RFC Errata System wrote:

The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9435,

"Considerations for Assigning a New Recommended Differentiated Services Code Point (DSCP)".



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You may review the report below and at:

https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid8081



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Type: Editorial

Reported by: Angelos Vassiliou <angelos2225@hotmail.com><mailto:angelos2225@hotmail.com>



Section: 1



Original Text

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A common set of DSCPs are defined for both IPv4 and IPv6



Corrected Text

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A common set of DSCPs is defined for both IPv4 and IPv6



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The subject of the sentence, "A common set" is singular, but the verb is plural.



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RFC9435 (draft-ietf-tsvwg-dscp-considerations-13)

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Title               : Considerations for Assigning a New Recommended Differentiated Services Code Point (DSCP)

Publication Date    : July 2023

Author(s)           : A. Custura, G. Fairhurst, R. Secchi

Category            : INFORMATIONAL

Source              : Transport and Services Working Group

Stream              : IETF

Verifying Party     : IESG

Thanks for letting us know.

The intent was to describe one common set, but an alternative that describes multiple sets of DSCPs by PHB groups would be equivalent.


While I do see the gammar could be improved, I don't think we need to record this, because I do not see an ambiguity in meaning. So,  in this case, I'd recommend we reject this Errata.

Best wishes,

Gorry Fairhurst

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