[tsvwg] Re: Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-zero-checksum-10: (with COMMENT)

Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Wed, 12 June 2024 21:09 UTC

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Date: Wed, 12 Jun 2024 17:09:01 -0400
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Subject: [tsvwg] Re: Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-zero-checksum-10: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Michael,

> On Jun 12, 2024, at 4:48 PM, tuexen@fh-muenster.de wrote:
> 
>> On 12. Jun 2024, at 20:39, Mahesh Jethanandani via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
>> 
>> Mahesh Jethanandani has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-zero-checksum-10: No Objection
> Hi Mahesh,
> 
> thanks for the review. Please find my comments in-line.
> 
> Best regards
> Michael
>> 
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>> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ 
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>> 
>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-zero-checksum/
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
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>> 
>> I support Deb's and Paul's DISCUSS.
>> 
>> No reference entries found for these items, which were mentioned in the text:
>> [RFCXXXX]. Perhaps a note to the RFC Editor is needed to replace XXXX with the
>> assigned RFC number.
> Doesn't
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-zero-checksum-10.html#section-8-1 <https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-zero-checksum-10.html#section-8-1>
> provide the text you suggest?

The tool generated a false positive. Ignore the comment.

Thanks.

>> 
>> -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>> NIT
>> -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>> 
>> All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
>> address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
>> automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool <https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool>), so there
>> will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
>> did with these suggestions.D
>> 
>> Section 8, paragraph 11
>>> r points have been addressed in an appropriate way. 9. Security Consideratio
>>>                            ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>> Consider replacing this phrase with the adverb "appropriately" to avoid
>> wordiness.
> Done. Thanks.


Mahesh Jethanandani
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