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From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
To: "stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie" <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
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Hi Stephen,
(Dropping last-call, adding QUIC WG)

You do have a point here. Considering that QUIC transport is not ready, I think
the alternative to have this document hang in RFC-editors queue is to actually
move Section 6.3 into draft-ietf-quic-transport. 

QUIC WG what do you think of that solution? It would allow draft-ietf-tsvwg-
datagram-plpmtud to be published without delays. 

Cheers

Magnus Westerlund


On Sat, 2020-04-04 at 14:11 -0700, Stephen Farrell via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Stephen Farrell
> Review result: Has Nits
> 
> 
> Thanks for addressing my earlier secdir comments on -15. I think
> the ones below remain but are, from my POV, nits:
> 
> - Abstract: This draft aims for proposed standard but is
> updating a BCP (RFC8085/BCP145).  I'm happy to leave the
> process-lawyering for that to others.
> 
> - 6.3: I am surprised that the QUIC description here is ready
> to be an RFC before QUIC itself. I do see there are
> normative references, but the potential for a breaking change
> still exists, and seems a bit unwise. (I'd suggest, holding
> this in the WG 'till the referenced QUIC drafts are in the RFC
> editor queue, or else taking that bit out and putting it into
> a new I-D.)
> 
> 
-- 
Cheers

Magnus Westerlund 


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