Re: [tsvwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-13.txt

"Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com> Tue, 21 May 2019 14:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-13.txt
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Bob, John, Pat,

In your draft, I noticed that you reference RFC 5129 but not 5462. A
reference to 5462 would be useful, as it updates 5129.

Cheers,
Andy


On Mon, May 20, 2019 at 6:40 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Transport Area Working Group WG of the
> IETF.
>
>         Title           : Guidelines for Adding Congestion Notification to
> Protocols that Encapsulate IP
>         Authors         : Bob Briscoe
>                           John Kaippallimalil
>                           Pat Thaler
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-13.txt
>         Pages           : 38
>         Date            : 2019-05-20
>
> Abstract:
>    The purpose of this document is to guide the design of congestion
>    notification in any lower layer or tunnelling protocol that
>    encapsulates IP.  The aim is for explicit congestion signals to
>    propagate consistently from lower layer protocols into IP.  Then the
>    IP internetwork layer can act as a portability layer to carry
>    congestion notification from non-IP-aware congested nodes up to the
>    transport layer (L4).  Following these guidelines should assure
>    interworking among IP layer and lower layer congestion notification
>    mechanisms, whether specified by the IETF or other standards bodies.
>    This document updates the advice to subnetwork designers about ECN in
>    RFC 3819.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines/
>
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-13
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-13
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