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Re: [tsvwg] FW: New Version Notification for draft-johansson-cc-for-4g-5g-00.txt

Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net> Fri, 23 October 2015 14:01 UTC

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To: "Smith, Kevin, (R&D) Vodafone Group" <Kevin.Smith@vodafone.com>, Ingemar Johansson S <ingemar.s.johansson@ericsson.com>
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Kevin,

Thx for yr review. I also found Ingemar's doc v useful and timely - I 
will be sending my own review shortly (minus some of the nits you 
already found).
One comment on yr comments...

On 19/10/15 11:07, Smith, Kevin, (R&D) Vodafone Group wrote:
> Because of the above it is a good practice to keep the amount of data 
> in flight as small as possible, without sacrificing throughput.
>> amount of data means number of packets (per text in following paragraph) - maybe worth changing to 'number of packets in flight'
I suggest this is left as "amount of data", because it is bytes not 
packets that is of concern.
However, it is a bit of a cryptic sentence anyway. It would be more 
straightforward to say "to keep RTT (and therefore queues) to a 
minimum", which is the only way to minimise the amount of data in flight 
without reducing throughput.



Bob

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