[tsvwg] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-tsvwg-careful-resume-09.txt

Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk> Wed, 12 June 2024 12:29 UTC

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We have just uploaded a new revision of the draft, this addresses 
consistency in the choice of words between the various contributions, it 
removes overlap and it more clearly separates guidance from requirements 
for the phases. This set of changes was disruptive to the text, and diff 
file has many entries. Despite moving text, there were only very minor 
changes to the method.

Comments welcome! The editors plan a further revision before the IETF to 
address any issues, and specifically to try to merge the new PR 
originating from Christian to include BBR.

Gorry

> A new version of Internet-Draft draft-ietf-tsvwg-careful-resume-09.txt has
> been successfully submitted by Godred Fairhurst and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name: draft-ietf-tsvwg-careful-resume
> Revision: 09
> Title: Convergence of Congestion Control from Retained State
> Date: 2024-06-12
> Group: tsvwg
> Pages: 31
> URL: 
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-tsvwg-careful-resume-09.txt
> Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-careful-resume/
> HTMLized: 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-careful-resume
> Diff: 
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-careful-resume-09
>