Re: [tsvwg] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8311 (5649)

"Black, David" <David.Black@dell.com> Mon, 11 March 2019 09:24 UTC

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Thread-Topic: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8311 (5649)
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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8311 (5649)
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Bob contacted me directly about this errata - from what I can see, the B.1 reference should've been to C.1 in the first place, so this errata should be approved, 

Thanks, --David (RFC 8311 author)

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> Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8311 (5649)
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> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8311,
> "Relaxing Restrictions on Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN)
> Experimentation".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5649
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net>
> 
> Section: 3.
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> see Appendix B.1 of [ECN-L4S].
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> see Appendix C.1 of [ECN-L4S].
> 
> Notes
> -----
> At the end of Section 8. there is another reference to the same information in
> the same Appendix:
> 
>    See Appendix C.1 of [ECN-L4S] for discussion of alternatives to the
>    ECN nonce.
> 
> So we have to change one to be consistent with the other. Let's use C.1,
> because that is the current number of the appendix in the relevant draft.
> 
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC8311 (draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-experimentation-08)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Relaxing Restrictions on Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN)
> Experimentation
> Publication Date    : January 2018
> Author(s)           : D. Black
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Transport Area Working Group
> Area                : Transport
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG