Re: [tsvwg] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud-19: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: Jonathan Morton <chromatix99@gmail.com>, Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>
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It looks good to me :-)

-éric

-----Original Message-----
From: Jonathan Morton <chromatix99@gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, 9 April 2020 at 15:50
To: Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>
Cc: Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>om>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>rg>, "draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud@ietf.org>rg>, "tsvwg-chairs@ietf.org" <tsvwg-chairs@ietf.org>rg>, "tsvwg@ietf.org" <tsvwg@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [tsvwg] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud-19: (with COMMENT)

    > On 9 Apr, 2020, at 4:32 pm, Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk> wrote:
    > 
    >> -- Section 2 --
    >> Looking for details in " A Packet is the IP header plus the IP payload." is it
    >> worth mentioning the IPv6 extension headers or using "IP headers" (plural form)
    >> ?
    > 
    > Yes. Good point. We will say the plural, but add a sentence after to be sure this is not overlooked!
    
    Is it enough to say "IP header(s)"?  The brackets both make the plurality optional, and visually highlight its possibility.
    
     - Jonathan Morton