Re: [tsvwg] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-13: (with COMMENT)

Vincent Roca <vincent.roca@inria.fr> Tue, 28 May 2019 06:59 UTC

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Dear Mirja,

> Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-13: No Objection
> 
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> Thanks for resolving the copyright issue.
> 
> I would prefer to see the Coding Coefficients Generation Function specified
> normatively in text and not only as code.

Yes I agree, and it’s quite easy. Here is the new text:

NEW:
   These two functions keep respectively the 4 or 8 less significant
   bits of the 32-bit pseudo-random number generated by the
   tinymt32_generate_uint32() function of [tinymt32].  This is done by
   computing the result of a binary AND between the
   tinymt32_generate_uint32() output and respectively the 0xF or 0xFF
   constants, using 32-bit unsigned integer operations.  […]

Regards,

  Vincent