Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4960 (2592)
Michael Tüxen <Michael.Tuexen@lurchi.franken.de> Fri, 29 October 2010 15:51 UTC
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Hi Gorry, --- OLD: The assignment of new chunk parameter type codes is done through an ^^^^^^^^^ IETF Review action, as defined in [RFC5226]. Documentation of a new chunk MUST contain the following information: NEW: The assignment of new chunk type codes is done through an IETF Review action, as defined in [RFC5226]. Documentation of a new chunk MUST contain the following information: --- Best regards Michael On Oct 29, 2010, at 5:40 PM, Gorry Fairhurst wrote: > > Michael, > > These seem to be straightforward corrections. Please propose some corrections in the form below, and we can make sure the RFC-Ed notes these. > > --- > OLD: > xxx > NEW: > xxx > > --- > > Gorry > > On 29/10/2010 16:19, Michael Tüxen wrote: >> Dear all, >> >> we should possibly fix the wording also in >> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-chunk-flags-02 >> during AUTH48. >> >> TSVWG chairs: Is that possible? >> >> Best regards >> Michael >> >> On Oct 29, 2010, at 4:10 PM, Randy Stewart wrote: >> >>> Dear RFC Editor: >>> >>> The Errata is correct.. Tom and I discussed this on the list >>> and I agree with it. We obviously made a cut-and paste typo.. since >>> chunk types are different than parameter types ;-) >>> >>> Best Wishes >>> >>> Randall Stewart >>> On Oct 29, 2010, at 6:35 AM, RFC Errata System wrote: >>> >>>> >>>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC4960, >>>> "Stream Control Transmission Protocol". >>>> >>>> -------------------------------------- >>>> You may review the report below and at: >>>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=4960&eid=2592 >>>> >>>> -------------------------------------- >>>> Type: Editorial >>>> Reported by: tom petch<ietfc@btconnect.com> >>>> >>>> Section: 14.1 >>>> >>>> Original Text >>>> ------------- >>>> 14.1. IETF-Defined Chunk Extension >>>> >>>> The assignment of new chunk parameter type codes is done through an >>>> IETF Consensus action, as defined in [RFC2434]. Documentation of the >>>> chunk parameter MUST contain the following information: >>>> >>>> >>>> Corrected Text >>>> -------------- >>>> 14.1. IETF-Defined Chunk Extension >>>> >>>> The assignment of new chunk type codes is done through an >>>> IETF Consensus action, as defined in [RFC2434]. Documentation of the >>>> chunk type MUST contain the following information: >>>> >>>> >>>> Notes >>>> ----- >>>> The OLD text relates to parameter types, and not chunk types, and already appears, correctly, in section 14.2. Section 14.1 is about chunk types,as the NEW text says. >>>> >>>> Instructions: >>>> ------------- >>>> This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please >>>> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or >>>> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG) >>>> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. >>>> >>>> -------------------------------------- >>>> RFC4960 (draft-ietf-tsvwg-2960bis-05) >>>> -------------------------------------- >>>> Title : Stream Control Transmission Protocol >>>> Publication Date : September 2007 >>>> Author(s) : R. Stewart, Ed. >>>> Category : PROPOSED STANDARD >>>> Source : Transport Area Working Group >>>> Area : Transport >>>> Stream : IETF >>>> Verifying Party : IESG >>>> >>> >>> ----- >>> Randall Stewart >>> randall@lakerest.net >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >> >> >> > >
- [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4960 (2592) RFC Errata System
- Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4960 (2592) Randy Stewart
- Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4960 (2592) Michael Tüxen
- Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4960 (2592) Gorry Fairhurst
- Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4960 (2592) Michael Tüxen
- Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4960 (2592) Chris Benson