[tsvwg] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-ndata-12: (with COMMENT)

[Ben Campbell <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-ndata-12: Yes

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COMMENT:
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I wish this had been around back when we were figuring out how to share
connections in MSRP.

Otherwise, just a couple of editorial comments:

- Abstract: "Multiple ways for performing
   this selection, called stream schedulers, are defined. "
I assume you mean that they are defined in this document rather than in
previously existing documents, but it seems ambiguous.

- 2.1: "The sender uses two counters for
      each outgoing stream, one for ordered messages, one for unordered
      messages.  All counters are independent and initially 0."

s/ all / both  ; unless this rule is intended to apply to more counters than
the ones mentioned in the previous sentence.