Re: [tsvwg] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud-19: (with COMMENT)

Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk> Thu, 09 April 2020 13:32 UTC

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On 09/04/2020 14:09, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker wrote:
> ank you for the work put into this document. The document is clear, easy to
> read and quite useful (perhaps mixing too many PL protocols though).
>
> Please find below nee non-blocking NIT.
>
> I hope that this helps to improve the document,
>
> Nice to read about the outcomes of the NEAT project
>
> Regards,
>
> -éric
>
> ==NIT ==
>
> -- Section 2 --
> Looking for details in " A Packet is the IP header plus the IP payload." is it
> worth mentioning the IPv6 extension headers or using "IP headers" (plural form)
> ?
>
Yes. Good point. We will say the plural, but add a sentence after to be 
sure this is not overlooked!

Gorry