Re: [tsvwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-07.txt

[Thomas Fossati <[e-mail]>]

Hi Gorry, Colin,

Thanks for the copious edits.  The intro reads really nice and, FWIW, I
like the way you used the Conclusions section.

A couple of minor suggestions:
- Section 2.1, 2nd sentence "Some operator [...]" seems broken.
- Section 2.2, you might want to consider replacing the reference to
  I-D.thomson-quic-grease (expired) with I-D.ietf-tls-grease.

cheers, t

On 04/07/2019, 21:05, "tsvwg on behalf of [e-mail]" <[e-mail] on behalf of [e-mail]> wrote:


    A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
    This draft is a work item of the Transport Area Working Group WG of the IETF.

            Title           : The Impact of Transport Header Confidentiality on Network Operation and Evolution of the Internet
            Authors         : Godred Fairhurst
                              Colin Perkins
    Filename        : draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-07.txt
    Pages           : 45
    Date            : 2019-07-04

    Abstract:
       This document describes implications of applying end-to-end
       encryption at the transport layer.  It identifies in-network uses of
       transport layer header information.  It then reviews the implications
       of developing end-to-end transport protocols that use authentication
       to protect the integrity of transport information or encryption to
       provide confidentiality of the transport protocol header and expected
       implications of transport protocol design and network operation.
       Since transport measurement and analysis of the impact of network
       characteristics have been important to the design of current
       transport protocols, it also considers the impact on transport and
       application evolution.


    The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt/

    There are also htmlized versions available at:
    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-07
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-07

    A diff from the previous version is available at:
    https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-07


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