[tsvwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11-09

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Thu, 05 October 2017 20:32 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-10-05
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC
Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: