[GNAP] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-gnap-resource-servers-08

Martin Duke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 16 September 2024 17:22 UTC

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Reviewer: Martin Duke
Review result: Ready

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF
discussion list for information.

When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this
review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC
tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review.

This protocol runs on top of HTTP, and creates no new novel Transport issues.