Re: [Tzdist-bis] Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-murchison-tzdist-tzif-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Eliot Lear <lear@ofcourseimright.com> Thu, 25 October 2018 13:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Tzdist-bis] Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-murchison-tzdist-tzif-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Authors:

This DISCUSS is something that has to be addressed prior to approval.  I
would like to highlight one other point, when considering textual changes:


On 25.10.18 14:13, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
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> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> DISCUSS:
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> This is a very boring, almost-trivial discuss point, but the document seems to have
> an internal inconsistency to resolve before publication:
>
> Section 3.1 says that the typecnt "MUST NOT be zero", but Section 3.2 says:
>
>    A TZif data block consists of seven variable-length elements, each of
>    which is series of zero or more items.  [...]
>
> This is in conflict with the above "MUST NOT be zero" for typecnt.
> I don't have a better suggestion than adding a parenthetical "(except for
> the local time records, which as mentioned above cannot have zero items)",
> even though I acknowledge that it is pretty awkward.
>

The very same text at issue can be found directly below typcnt in
charcnt.  Therefore, my suggestion is to simply drop the phase "each of
which is series of zero or more items", as it is redundant/superfluous,
considering the very next sentence which reads:

> The number of items in each
>    series is determined by the corresponding count field in the header.

Eliot