Re: [Tzdist] WGLC for draft-ietf-tzdist-service-05

Some minor points:

Typo:
Section 4.1
"The interactions with the HTTP server can be broken down into a set
"actions" that define the overall function being requested "
needs "of" between "set" and "actions".

Section 5.2.1
"In this example the client requests the time zone identifiers and in
addition requests that the US-English local names be returned."
No such local-name request appears in the example.

Section 5.4.1, 5.5.1
Example request URLs are malformed (no "?")

While I didn't read every last word, I think the draft is ready to move forward.

Stephen

On 18 January 2015 at 21:49, Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> Dear Friends an Colleagues,
>
> This is the Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for draft-ietf-tzdist-service-05
> [1]. Please provide all comments by February 2.
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Daniel and Eliot
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> [1] http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tzdist-service-05
>
> On Sat, Jan 17, 2015 at 6:52 PM, Lester Caine <lester@lsces.co.uk> wrote:
>>
>> Looking good!
>>
>> Question ... Any reason why 'opaque token' would not be simply the
>> version? Since the data is locked to it's version number nothing else
>> should exist.
>>
>> Only problem ...
>> I'm still unconvinced by the attempt to create "monolithic" and
>> "incremental" models! If I am publishing an historic snapshot, I need a
>> complete set of timezones for that version ... even if my publication
>> method is only supplying the incremental changes. It is an
>> implementation detail of the storage process and asking for an
>> 'incremental' version just seems wrong. One needs the 'monolithic'
>> version at that point. If my data source is TZ, then the only version
>> numbers are those provided by the 'monolithic' view, but I only notify
>> the incremental changes.
>>
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