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Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 09 May 2018 18:01 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Unbearable] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14
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Linda, thanks for your review. Dirk, thanks for your response. Vary is defined in RFC 7231 I think, so it would be trivial to add a citation, but agree that it is not strictly necessary.

I have entered a DISCUSS ballot to chat about some issues in Sec 2.1.

Alissa

> On May 3, 2018, at 10:54 PM, Dirk Balfanz <balfanz@google.com> wrote:
> 
> The Vary response header refers to this HTTP header: https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTTP/Headers/Vary <https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTTP/Headers/Vary> 
> 
> I think an additional definition/citation is unnecessary, as other basic concepts of HTTP are also left undefined/uncited in the spec..
> 
> Please let me know if that's not acceptable, and I'll look for a way to add a citation.
> 
> Thank,
> 
> Dirk.
> 
> 
> On Thu, May 3, 2018 at 1:35 PM Linda Dunbar <Linda.dunbar@huawei.com <mailto:Linda.dunbar@huawei.com>> wrote:
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review Date: 2018-05-03
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-12
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10
> 
> Summary:
> The document is written very clear, easy to understand,  and content is
> complete.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> Section 2 Page 4:
> Question: is "Very response" a specific response in the following sentence?  If
> yes, need to provide the definition as  I don't see it being defined anywhere
>   "MAY be listed by a server in a Vary response header field,.."
> 
> thank you.
> 
> Linda dunbar
> 
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