Re: [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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From: Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com>
Date: Mon, 25 Jun 2018 16:30:08 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Ben, Does the following new text address your concern: https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/cgi-bin/xml2rfc.cgi?modeAsFormat=html/ascii&url=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/TokenBinding/Internet-Drafts/master/draft-ietf-tokbind-https-18.xml On Mon, Jun 4, 2018 at 1:26 PM, Dirk Balfanz < balfanz=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > Hi Ben, > > thanks for the feedback. Most of it is addressed in the new draft ( > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tokbind-https-16). See below > (inline) for details. > > On Wed, May 9, 2018 at 1:38 PM Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote: > >> Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for >> draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14: Discuss >> >> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all >> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this >> introductory paragraph, however.) >> >> >> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html >> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. >> >> >> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tokbind-https/ >> >> >> >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> DISCUSS: >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> >> I plan to ballot "YES", but I want to clear up once concern first: >> >> After reading section 6 several times, I don't know what it means. I >> think it's [...] >> > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> COMMENT: >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> >> Substantive Comments: >> >> §1.1: Please consider using the boilerplate from 8174 across the cluster. >> Both >> this and the protocol draft have lower case keyword instances. >> > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> >> §8.2: >> - Does it really make sense to wait for a user to request the keys be >> expired? >> I suspect the average user does this about never. Did the working group >> discuss >> possibly making the keys default to expiring after some period of time? > > > Yes, we did discuss it. This was chosen consciously to be in sync with > cookies and their expirations / manual user-initiated purges. > > - Why >> is the SHOULD in paragraph 2 not a MUST? >> > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> >> Editorial Comments: >> >> §2: >> - Paragraph 1: "The ABNF of the Sec-Token-Binding header field is (in >> [RFC7230] >> style, see also Section 8.3 of [RFC7231]):" The open parenthesis before >> "in" >> seems misplaced. Also, as written the comma after "style" creates a comma >> splice. (Note that this pattern occurs elsewhere in the document.) >> >> - Paragraph 3: The paragraph is a single hard-to-parse sentence. Please >> consider breaking into simpler sentences. >> > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> >> - example: Am I correct to assume the backslashes are just for print >> purposes >> and are not in the actual message? If so, please mention that. >> > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> >> § 2.1: >> - first paragraph, "Within the latter context...": There was no former >> context. >> I suggest "Within that context..." > > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> - 2nd paragraph: The first sentence is hard >> to parse. I suggest breaking it into separate paragraphs, or restructure >> without the center-imbedding. > > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> - 2nd to last paragraph: Does "SHOULD generally" >> mean the same as just "SHOULD"? >> > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> >> §5.1: 2nd paragraph: Unneeded comma in "... itself, to another server..." >> > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> >> §5.2, >> - last bullet: " (between client and Token Consumer)" seems more than >> parenthetical. Please consider removing the parentheses. > > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> - paragraph after last >> bullet: The parenthetical phrase starting with "(proving possession...) is >> quite long and makes the sentence hard to parse. Given that the concept is >> covered in the immediately preceding paragraph, can it be removed? >> > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> >> §7.1 and §7.2: These sections seem to be copied from (or restate >> requirements >> in) the protocol and negotiation drafts. Can they be included by reference >> instead, or at least attributed? >> > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> >> §7.2, 2nd paragraph: This seams like a restatement of §7.1. >> > > Addressed in new draft. > > >> §8.3: Unneeded comma in first sentence. >> > > Addressed in new draft. > > Thanks again for the thoughtful comments! > > Dirk. > > _______________________________________________ > Unbearable mailing list > Unbearable@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/unbearable > >
- Re: [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-… Eric Rescorla
- Re: [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-… Andrei Popov
- Re: [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-… John Bradley
- Re: [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-… John Bradley
- Re: [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-… Andrei Popov
- Re: [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-… Eric Rescorla
- [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-… Dirk Balfanz