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Re: [Unbearable] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14

Dirk Balfanz <balfanz@google.com> Fri, 04 May 2018 02:55 UTC

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From: Dirk Balfanz <balfanz@google.com>
Date: Fri, 04 May 2018 02:54:54 +0000
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Subject: Re: [Unbearable] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14
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The Vary response header refers to this HTTP header:
https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTTP/Headers/Vary

I think an additional definition/citation is unnecessary, as other basic
concepts of HTTP are also left undefined/uncited in the spec.

Please let me know if that's not acceptable, and I'll look for a way to add
a citation.

Thank,

Dirk.


On Thu, May 3, 2018 at 1:35 PM Linda Dunbar <Linda.dunbar@huawei.com> wrote:

> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review Date: 2018-05-03
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-12
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10
>
> Summary:
> The document is written very clear, easy to understand,  and content is
> complete.
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: None
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> Section 2 Page 4:
> Question: is "Very response" a specific response in the following
> sentence?  If
> yes, need to provide the definition as  I don't see it being defined
> anywhere
>   "MAY be listed by a server in a Vary response header field,.."
>
> thank you.
>
> Linda dunbar
>
>
>

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