[Unbearable] Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-tokbind-protocol-17: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Tue, 08 May 2018 03:48 UTC

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Subject: [Unbearable] Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-tokbind-protocol-17: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tokbind-protocol-17: Yes

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Thanks for a well-written document. I have only one very small nit to
incorporate if a new version of the document is produced prior to RFC editor
hand-off:

§1:

>  A Token Binding is established by a user agent generating a private-
>  public key pair (possibly, within a secure hardware module, such as
>  TPM)

Nit: remove comma after "possibly"

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