[Unbearable] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-tokbind-https-17: (with COMMENT)

[Ben Campbell <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-tokbind-https-17: Yes

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for addressing my DISCUSS and substantive comments in pre-submission
text. I did not check editorial comments.

I have one remaining (non-blocking) question on section 6: Are the
“applications” from paragraph 3 the same as those from paragraph 2? It seems
like paragraph 2 is talking more about local APIs (at least, I see that was
mentioned in the text in version 17 but not in 18), but paragraph 3 uses an
example of a signal from a server. (I can accept that the difference in control
may be weak enough for web applications that the distinction does not matter.)