[urn] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-urnbis-ns-reg-transition-08: (with COMMENT)
Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Tue, 01 August 2017 21:23 UTC
Return-Path: <adam@nostrum.com>
X-Original-To: urn@ietf.org
Delivered-To: urn@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 40458127735; Tue, 1 Aug 2017 14:23:33 -0700 (PDT)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
From: Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com>
To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
Cc: draft-ietf-urnbis-ns-reg-transition@ietf.org, Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>, urnbis-chairs@ietf.org, barryleiba@computer.org, urn@ietf.org
X-Test-IDTracker: no
X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.58.0
Auto-Submitted: auto-generated
Precedence: bulk
Message-ID: <150162261325.12068.7781273814707022394.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com>
Date: Tue, 01 Aug 2017 14:23:33 -0700
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/urn/BOFiI3fbYGg0qM428N5WdxAif_E>
Subject: [urn] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-urnbis-ns-reg-transition-08: (with COMMENT)
X-BeenThere: urn@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22
List-Id: Revisions to URN RFCs <urn.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/urn>, <mailto:urn-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/urn/>
List-Post: <mailto:urn@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:urn-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/urn>, <mailto:urn-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 01 Aug 2017 21:23:33 -0000
Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-urnbis-ns-reg-transition-08: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-urnbis-ns-reg-transition/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Major comment: Section 3 has suggested changes for RFC3188 for the next time it is revised. It's not clear, outside of institutional knowledge (which is a very fragile construct) how the indicated changes are going to be properly remembered when such revision takes place. Is there a good reason this document doesn't simply update RFC3188 by indicating an updated template directly? If this doesn't make sense, I would think that we need at least an erratum associated with RFC3188 that indicates the nature of update that needs to be performed. Minor comments: The draft header indicates that this document obsoletes RFC3044 and RFC3187, but the abstract doesn't mention this, which it should. The document has at least nine places where external documents are mentioned but which are not, themselves, reference citations (e.g., "RFC 8141" rather than "[RFC8141]" in section 2). This will interact poorly with some RFC-related tooling. Please change these to references.
- [urn] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-urn… Adam Roach
- Re: [urn] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf… John C Klensin
- Re: [urn] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf… Eric Rescorla
- Re: [urn] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf… Adam Roach
- Re: [urn] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf… John C Klensin
- Re: [urn] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf… Adam Roach
- Re: [urn] Adam Roach's Discuss on draft-ietf-urnb… John C Klensin
- Re: [urn] Adam Roach's Discuss on draft-ietf-urnb… Martin J. Dürst
- Re: [urn] Adam Roach's Discuss on draft-ietf-urnb… John C Klensin
- Re: [urn] Adam Roach's Discuss on draft-ietf-urnb… Adam Roach
- Re: [urn] Adam Roach's Discuss on draft-ietf-urnb… Spencer Dawkins
- Re: [urn] Adam Roach's Discuss on draft-ietf-urnb… Alexey Melnikov