Re: [urn] draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-17

R Atarius <r_atarius@yahoo.com> Tue, 01 May 2018 21:19 UTC

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From: R Atarius <r_atarius@yahoo.com>
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Subject: Re: [urn] draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-17
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ThanksDone!

      From: "Svensson, Lars" <L.Svensson@dnb.de>
 To: R Atarius <r_atarius@yahoo.com>; "urn@ietf.org" <urn@ietf.org> 
 Sent: Monday, April 23, 2018 3:13 AM
 Subject: RE: draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-17
   
Hi Roozbeh,

On Friday, April 13, 2018 1:53 AM, R Atarius [mailto:r_atarius@yahoo.com] wrote:

> new revision has been uploaded.
> 
> https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-17.txt

Thanks, as promised I've now read the complete I-D again.

Tiniest nits:

1) The declaration of syntactic structure uses "pchar" and "pct-encoded" without defining them anywhere. You might want to add something along the lines "'pchar' and 'pct-encoded' are defined in RFC 3986".

2) In the references section, the entry for SC.R4002-0 has "Version 10.0" in the text but the URL and the linked document say Version 12.0.

Best,

Lars