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Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Fri, 13 April 2018 02:02 UTC

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Subject: Re: [urn] draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-17
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On 4/12/18 5:52 PM, R Atarius wrote:
> Hello all,
> 
> new revision has been uploaded. 
> 
> https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-17.txt

Thanks, Roozbeh.

My apologies for not commenting on earlier versions of this document.
Herewith some comments.

1. The title talks about MEID but this is really a registration for
3GPP2 as an organization, isn't it? That's a bit confusing.

2. The document uses the template from RFC 3406, not the updated
template from RFC 8141. Would you mind modernizing Section 3?

3. HEX is defined as uppercase only. If lexical equivalence to lowercase
a-f is desired, let's specify that in the registration.

4. This registration seems to fall under the fast-track registration
policy (Section 6.3 of RFC 8141) and thus could point to [S.R0048-A] for
many details (e.g., much of Section 4.2 in this Internet-Draft).

Making these changes should not be too onerous, and might make the
document shorter and simpler.

Peter

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