Re: [urn] urn-registration-template-jaif-v2.txt
worley@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) Tue, 24 April 2018 02:07 UTC
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Subject: Re: [urn] urn-registration-template-jaif-v2.txt
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I lost track of this submission as well. It's quite well-done and straightforward. My only comments are a couple of very minor editorial things. > The urn is not expected to become part of an IETF standard. I think you want to change "urn" to "URN namespace" here. > Syntax: > > The Namespace Specific String (NSS) of all URNs assigned by the > JAIF will have the following hierarchical structure: There are a couple of place where you say "the JAIF", whereas most are simply "JAIF". You probably want to make these consistent. Dale
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