Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525bis-00.txt

Julien ÉLIE <julien@trigofacile.com> Fri, 30 October 2020 12:35 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525bis-00.txt
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Hi,

> We have just published version -00 of the WG draft.

Thanks for this new version.
Just to report two nits while reading it:

In Section 3.3, a comma is missing after "when using TLS 1.2":
   In order to help prevent compression-related attacks (summarized in	
   Section 2.6 of [RFC7457]), when using TLS 1.2 implementations and	
   deployments SHOULD disable TLS-level compression (Section 6.2.2 of	
   [RFC5246]), unless the application protocol in question has been	
   shown not to be open to such attacks.


In Section 6, the first sub-section is not correctly identified ("## 
Host Name Validation" should be 6.1).

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Julien ÉLIE

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