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Re: [Uta] Robert Wilton's Discuss on draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525bis-09: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Tue, 19 July 2022 16:45 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Uta] Robert Wilton's Discuss on draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525bis-09: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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One more small note below...

On 7/19/22 10:30 AM, Rob Wilton (rwilton) wrote:

<snip/>

> You may want to consider whether it is worth making it clearer, either in the titles or the first intro paragraph, in section of 3.1.1/3.1.2 that the protocol version requirements are specifically about implementations, and deployments are allowed/encouraged to restrict deployments to later TLS versions where reasonable/appropriate.  Otherwise, I suspect that readers may well have both implementations and deployments in their head when they read this section.

Good point. I'll look at the entire document again from this perspective 
and see where we might add some clarifying text.

<snip/>

> Thank you for being patient with me and accommodating my concerns.

Thank you for the DISCUSSion; the result is a better spec.

Peter

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