Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-smtp-tlsrpt-23.txt

James Cloos <cloos@jhcloos.com> Thu, 14 June 2018 19:04 UTC

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> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-uta-smtp-tlsrpt-23

Some newlines got lost in that update.

The diff makes it easy to see.

Also, the new copy needs:

  s/by and Adler-32/by an Adler-32/

Otherwise it looks good.

-JimC
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