Re: [v6ops] draft-bao-v6ops-rfc6145bis WGLC

<holger.metschulat@telekom.de> Tue, 01 December 2015 13:11 UTC

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Subject: Re: [v6ops] draft-bao-v6ops-rfc6145bis WGLC
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Hello,

some comments:

- draft-anderson-v6ops-siit-eam is now on version 03, and in the RFC Editor queue - should RFC6145bis waint until the EAM RFC is published to get the references right?

- A.1 step 1 suggests that the IPv6 host must perform the formation of the IPv6 destination address from the IPv4 address of the peer on its own, knowing the address mapping algorithm. Should it be mentioned here that the mapping could have been done externally, e.g. by a AAAA DNS entry or inband signalling, so that the mapping algorithm does not need to be known on the v6 host (same applies for A.2)?

- 3.1: Translation of the Source and Destination Address: While the algorithms are stated, it is unclear to me what the translator should do if it finds a translation only for the source address, but not for the destination address, and vice versa? Section 5 says that RFC6052 is the default mapping, but this is a "SHOULD" so we could end up in a situation where not both source and destination address can be translated at the same time.

Holger



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Betreff: [v6ops] draft-bao-v6ops-rfc6145bis WGLC

This is to initiate a two week working group last call of http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-bao-v6ops-rfc6145bis.  
Please read it now. If you find nits (spelling errors, minor suggested wording changes, etc), comment to the authors; if you find greater issues, such as disagreeing with a statement or finding additional issues that need to be addressed, please post your comments to the list.

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