[v6ops] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-slaac-renum-04: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 22 October 2020 07:05 UTC

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Subject: [v6ops] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-slaac-renum-04: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-v6ops-slaac-renum-04: No Objection

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I concur with Martin Duke's suggestion.  Otherwise, I've just a couple of nits here:

Abstract:

* "This document documents this issue ..." -- how about "describes"?

Section 1:

* s/timelier/more timely/