Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-bao-v6ops-rfc6145bis-00.txt

Xing Li <xing@cernet.edu.cn> Mon, 06 July 2015 10:58 UTC

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Subject: Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-bao-v6ops-rfc6145bis-00.txt
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Thanks for the comments. Some issues (hairpinn) are under discussion and 
we will address your comments in the next version. xing

Brian E Carpenter 写道:
> Hi,
>
> The content looks good except for section 6.2 (hairpinning) which seems superficial
> and includes a broken reference.
>   

> There are nits:
>
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>> This document updates RFC 6145.
>>     
>
> Surely that should be "obsoletes" (if not, it isn't a "bis" document).
>
> IMHO, unless you have explicit permission from the author of RFC 2765,
> you still need the <rfc ipr="pre5378Trust200902"> boilerplate.
>
> A short "Changes from RFC6145" appendix would be useful.
>
> Regards
>    Brian
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