Re: [v6ops] Continuing WGLC: ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-03

[Joel Halpern <[e-mail]>]

Thank you.  The introduction now seems to me quite clear, and lays out 
the case for the procedures the draft introduces.  I also appreciate the 
caveats and clarifications in the Applicability and Limitations section (5).

Yours,

Joel

On 10/6/2023 11:48 AM, Jen Linkova wrote:
> Dear v6ops WG,
>
> We have just submitted the -03 version for
> ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device - thank you very much to everyone who
> provided feedback!
> Please review and let us know if the draft is ready to progress.
>
> The main changes:
> - Introduction is rewritten (much shorter and, hopefully, more clear)
> - some text about multiple addresses use cases moved to Appendix.
> - The Applicability and Limitation section is moved up, so it's in the
> beginning - hopefully it would help the readers to understand what
> scenarios are in scope and what are not.
> - Client Mobility section added to discuss what happens when a client
> moves between network attachment points.
> - the draft is now explicit that it focuses on "a pool per link"
> scenario, which also drastically simplifies the routing and relay
> requirements (the routing section is updated as well).
> - the draft now suggests Active Leasequery as one of the mechanisms to
> keep the relay state in sync with the server.
> - The Prefix Consideration section has been updated and states that
> the endpoints are not required to use SLAAC - it's just the network
> allows them to do that, if they need to.
> - various changes to address other comments received during the WGLC so far.
>
> I'd like to ask everyone who has expressed concerns during this WGLC
> (you are in Cc: - hopefully I didn't miss anyone) to review the new
> version and let the author know if you still have concerns.
>
> Thank you!
>
> On Fri, Oct 6, 2023 at 8:35 AM <[e-mail]> wrote:
>> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-03.txt is now available. It
>> is a work item of the IPv6 Operations (V6OPS) WG of the IETF.
>>
>>     Title:   Using DHCPv6-PD to Allocate Unique IPv6 Prefix per Client in Large Broadcast Networks
>>     Authors: Lorenzo Colitti
>>              Jen Linkova
>>              Xiao Ma
>>     Name:    draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-03.txt
>>     Pages:   18
>>     Dates:   2023-10-06
>>
>> Abstract:
>>
>>     This document discusses an IPv6 deployment scenario when individual
>>     clients connected to large broadcast networks (such as enterprise
>>     networks or public Wi-Fi networks) are allocated unique prefixes via
>>     DHCPv6 Prefix Delegation (DHCPv6-PD).
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device/
>>
>> There is also an HTML version available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-03.html
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-03
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
>> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
>>
>>
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