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Re: [v6ops] Mickael's Comments (was RE: I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-profile-19.txt)

Mikael Abrahamsson <swmike@swm.pp.se> Tue, 24 February 2015 07:24 UTC

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From: Mikael Abrahamsson <swmike@swm.pp.se>
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Subject: Re: [v6ops] Mickael's Comments (was RE: I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-profile-19.txt)
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On Tue, 24 Feb 2015, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:

> Hi Mickael,
>
> This new version integrates your comments (http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/v6ops/current/msg21487.html).
>
> Please double check it and let me know if it OK with you.

Hi,

I am reading the diff between -18 and -19. You've changed the terminology 
to include 802.11. I believe it's unwise to go down this path, because I 
know of devices with 3GPP baseband that can connect to bluetooth, to wired 
ethernet, I can probably dig up 802.15.4 as well. I would recommend to 
make this more generalized.

page 4 line 48

"Moreover, this profile covers cellular CPEs"

I would add an "also" in there, for instance "... this profile also 
convers...."

Apart from that, the new text shown in the -18 to -19 diff looks fine to 
me.


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Mikael Abrahamsson    email: swmike@swm.pp.se

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