Re: [v6ops] draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam WGLC

"Hemant Singh (shemant)" <shemant@cisco.com> Mon, 15 June 2015 11:26 UTC

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Tore/Alberto,

At the end of the A.1 section you have text that says "Note that this is the exact opposite of the SIIT-DC use case".  At the end of the A.3 section you have text that says  "Note that this is the exact opposite of the 464XLAT use case".

It's not clear to me what is "opposite" referring to.   Do you even need these two sentences in the document?

Thanks,

Hemant

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Subject: [v6ops] draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam WGLC

This is to initiate a two week working group last call of http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam.  
Please read it now. If you find nits (spelling errors, minor suggested wording changes, etc), comment to the authors; if you find greater issues, such as disagreeing with a statement or finding additional issues that need to be addressed, please post your comments to the list.

We are looking specifically for comments on the importance of the document as well as its content. If you have read the document and believe it to be of operational utility, that is also an important comment to make.

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