Re: [v6ops] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-07: (with COMMENT)

Hi all,

As I can't upload anyway a new version because the ID cut-off, I'm attaching the "draft" new version with the actual edits following the last emails from Alissa, Mirja and Roman, in case you will like to add/amend/suggest anything else.

Thanks!

Regards,
Jordi
@jordipalet

El 10/7/19 22:15, "v6ops en nombre de Jordi Palet Martínez" <v6ops-bounces@ietf.org en nombre de jordi.palet=40theipv6company.com@dmarc.ietf.org> escribió:

    Hi Alisa,

    Thanks for the inputs.

    Responses below, in-line.

    Regards,
    Jordi
    @jordipalet

    El 10/7/19 21:24, "Alissa Cooper via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> escribió:

        Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
        draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-07: No Objection

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        for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.

        The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
        https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment/

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        COMMENT:
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        It is strange to me that this document interleaves figures that are numbered
        and figures that are lettered.

    I want to make sure that the figures that will take part of the table in figure 13 are numbered consecutively, so the only way I was able to find was using letters for the figures in that part of text that don't belong to that table.

        = Section 4.4.2 =

        "A new trend is for ..."

        This will not age well, probably better to phrase this in a timeless fashion.

    I will find a better way.

    I will keep this for a couple of days in case there are more inputs, so I can accommodate all them in a single version.     

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Re: [v6ops] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-07: (with COMMENT)

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