Re: [v6ops] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-02: (with COMMENT)

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Tue, 26 May 2015 08:01 UTC

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Dear Barry,

Many thanks for the careful review. 

An updated version is available online. A diff is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-02&url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-03 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : v6ops [mailto:v6ops-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Barry Leiba
> Envoyé : vendredi 22 mai 2015 06:48
> À : The IESG
> Cc : v6ops@ietf.org
> Objet : [v6ops] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-
> prefix-02: (with COMMENT)
> 
> Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-02: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> Only editorial comments here, for your consideration.  The one about
> "barring" is the most important one.
> 
> -- Section 1 --
> In the second paragraph, I suggest removing the parentheses from
> "(mis)".
> 
> In the fourth paragraph, I had to read the first sentence several times
> in order to parse it.  The word order confused me, making me think "link
> routing", rather than "to link".  You can easily fix that by changing "to
> not link" to "not to link".
> 
> In the fifth paragraph, "barring" is ambiguous: I don't know whether you
> mean that because IPv6 forwarding must follow the longest-match-first
> rule, configuration of an overriding policy is barred (forbidden), or
> whether you mean that IPv6 forwarding must follow the longest-match-first
> rule *unless* an overriding policy is configured.  I'm guessing it's the
> latter, but you should reword this either way, to make it clear.
> 
> In the last paragraph, what does "a historical reminder" mean?
> 
> -- Section 2 --
> In the second paragraph, I note that too many attributive nouns put
> together make for awkwardness and confusion.  I suggest changing
> "Forwarding decision-making processes" to "Decision-making processes for
> forwarding", so it's clear that "forwarding" is a gerund (noun), not a
> participle (verb).
> 
> I suggest removing the word "obviously" from the third paragraph: if it's
> really obvious, it needn't be said at all, and the word makes it sound
> haughty.
> 
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