[v6ops] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-v4v6-xlat-prefix-01

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sun, 28 May 2017 06:49 UTC

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Date: Sat, 27 May 2017 23:49:58 -0700
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Subject: [v6ops] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-v4v6-xlat-prefix-01

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-v4v6-xlat-prefix-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-05-27
IETF LC End Date: 2017-06-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready with issues for publication as standard track
RFC
Major issues:

Minor issues:
I was wondering why this document does not update RFC6052. My
reasoning is that RFC7915 section 6 says "The translator MUST support
the stateless address mapping algorithm defined in [RFC6052], which is
the default behavior."  This document suggests that the mapping in
this document can be used.

Nits/editorial comments:

Re: [v6ops] Genart last call review of draft-ietf… Tore Anderson
[v6ops] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6o… Roni Even
Re: [v6ops] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of … Alissa Cooper