Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-bao-v6ops-rfc6145bis-00.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sat, 04 July 2015 20:23 UTC

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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Hi,

The content looks good except for section 6.2 (hairpinning) which seems superficial
and includes a broken reference.

There are nits:

> This document updates RFC 6145.

Surely that should be "obsoletes" (if not, it isn't a "bis" document).

IMHO, unless you have explicit permission from the author of RFC 2765,
you still need the <rfc ipr="pre5378Trust200902"> boilerplate.

A short "Changes from RFC6145" appendix would be useful.

Regards
   Brian