Re: [v6ops] Continuing WGLC: ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-03

[Jen Linkova <[e-mail]>]

On Tue, Oct 10, 2023 at 7:02 AM Joel Halpern <[e-mail]> wrote:
> > "For example, it can form addresses as described in [RFC7084]
> > requirement WAA-7"?
> <Jmh>Yes, that would help.  It would remove the part that confused me
> and leave a reasonable reference. </jmh>

> > Actually I believe the draft says (Section 6.2, the first-hop router
> > requirements)
> >
> > "With the first-hop routers performing DHCPv6 relay functions, the
> > proposed design neither requires any subsequent relays in the path nor
> > introduce any requirements to such relays, if they are deployed."
> >
> > Do you think we shall explicitly say smth like "requirements (like snooping)"?
> <jmh>Clearly, I did not read carefully enough.  It is there. Still, I
> think adding the parenthetical would help.  </jmh>

Great, I've just sent a github PR, the proposed changes will appear in -04.

> >>> On Fri, Oct 6, 2023 at 9:05 AM Joel Halpern <[e-mail]> wrote:
> >>>> Thank you.  The introduction now seems to me quite clear, and lays out
> >>>> the case for the procedures the draft introduces.  I also appreciate the
> >>>> caveats and clarifications in the Applicability and Limitations section (5).
> >>> Thanks a lot for review and feedback, Joel!
> >>> I'd like to confirm if you think that the current version of the draft
> >>> is ready to complete the WGLC?
> >>>> Joel
> >>>>
> >>>> On 10/6/2023 11:48 AM, Jen Linkova wrote:
> >>>>> Dear v6ops WG,
> >>>>>
> >>>>> We have just submitted the -03 version for
> >>>>> ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device - thank you very much to everyone who
> >>>>> provided feedback!
> >>>>> Please review and let us know if the draft is ready to progress.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> The main changes:
> >>>>> - Introduction is rewritten (much shorter and, hopefully, more clear)
> >>>>> - some text about multiple addresses use cases moved to Appendix.
> >>>>> - The Applicability and Limitation section is moved up, so it's in the
> >>>>> beginning - hopefully it would help the readers to understand what
> >>>>> scenarios are in scope and what are not.
> >>>>> - Client Mobility section added to discuss what happens when a client
> >>>>> moves between network attachment points.
> >>>>> - the draft is now explicit that it focuses on "a pool per link"
> >>>>> scenario, which also drastically simplifies the routing and relay
> >>>>> requirements (the routing section is updated as well).
> >>>>> - the draft now suggests Active Leasequery as one of the mechanisms to
> >>>>> keep the relay state in sync with the server.
> >>>>> - The Prefix Consideration section has been updated and states that
> >>>>> the endpoints are not required to use SLAAC - it's just the network
> >>>>> allows them to do that, if they need to.
> >>>>> - various changes to address other comments received during the WGLC so far.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> I'd like to ask everyone who has expressed concerns during this WGLC
> >>>>> (you are in Cc: - hopefully I didn't miss anyone) to review the new
> >>>>> version and let the author know if you still have concerns.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>
> >>>>> On Fri, Oct 6, 2023 at 8:35 AM <[e-mail]> wrote:
> >>>>>> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-03.txt is now available. It
> >>>>>> is a work item of the IPv6 Operations (V6OPS) WG of the IETF.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>       Title:   Using DHCPv6-PD to Allocate Unique IPv6 Prefix per Client in Large Broadcast Networks
> >>>>>>       Authors: Lorenzo Colitti
> >>>>>>                Jen Linkova
> >>>>>>                Xiao Ma
> >>>>>>       Name:    draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-03.txt
> >>>>>>       Pages:   18
> >>>>>>       Dates:   2023-10-06
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Abstract:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>       This document discusses an IPv6 deployment scenario when individual
> >>>>>>       clients connected to large broadcast networks (such as enterprise
> >>>>>>       networks or public Wi-Fi networks) are allocated unique prefixes via
> >>>>>>       DHCPv6 Prefix Delegation (DHCPv6-PD).
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> >>>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device/
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> There is also an HTML version available at:
> >>>>>> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-03.html
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> >>>>>> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-03
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
> >>>>>> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
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> >>>
> >>> --
> >>> SY, Jen Linkova aka Furry
> >
> >



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