Re: [v6ops] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-07: (with COMMENT)

Jordi Palet Martínez <jordi.palet@theipv6company.com> Wed, 10 July 2019 20:15 UTC

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Subject: Re: [v6ops] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-07: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Alisa,

Thanks for the inputs.

Responses below, in-line.

Regards,
Jordi
@jordipalet
 

El 10/7/19 21:24, "Alissa Cooper via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> escribió:

    Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-07: No Objection
    
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    It is strange to me that this document interleaves figures that are numbered
    and figures that are lettered.

I want to make sure that the figures that will take part of the table in figure 13 are numbered consecutively, so the only way I was able to find was using letters for the figures in that part of text that don't belong to that table.

    
    = Section 4.4.2 =
    
    "A new trend is for ..."
    
    This will not age well, probably better to phrase this in a timeless fashion.
    
I will find a better way.

I will keep this for a couple of days in case there are more inputs, so I can accommodate all them in a single version.     
    



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