Re: [v6ops] illustration? (was: I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-64share-09.txt)

Alexandru Petrescu <alexandru.petrescu@gmail.com> Mon, 07 October 2013 07:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [v6ops] illustration? (was: I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-64share-09.txt)
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Hi,

Thanks for this new version.

Remark: it may be that a graphical illustration may be useful to a 
hurried reader.  To that end I suggest this:

> Example of use
> --------------
>
> Use-case
> --------
>
> The following use case is pertinent for the 64share method described
> in this document.  It consists in a User Equipment (UE) connecting to
> a IPv6 cellular network and 'sharing' this connection with one or
> several Hosts present in a small network it controls.  This use-case
> is also known under the name 'tethering' (despite concerning mostly
> wireless links).
>
> The topology supporting such a use case is depicted in the following
> figure:
>
>             /-----\
>            /       \
>           /    --   \   ptp link  ----        ------
>  Internet--   |AR|------       --| UE |--  --| Host1|
>           \    --   /             ----        ------
>            \       /                      |
>             \- ---/                       |   ------
>             cellular                      +--| Hostn|
>             network                           ------


What do you think?

Alex

Le 07/10/2013 01:02, Vízdal Aleš a écrit :
> Hi,
>
> A new version has just been submitted, please check it and provide your comments.
>
> This version is mainly addressing (or at least trying to) Lorenzo's comment(s) about splitting
> the document into requirements and example section.
>
> Cheers,
> Ales
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: v6ops-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:v6ops-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of internet-
>> drafts@ietf.org
>> Sent: Monday, October 07, 2013 12:53 AM
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>> Subject: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-64share-09.txt
>>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>   This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations Working Group of the IETF.
>>
>> 	Title           : Extending an IPv6 /64 Prefix from a 3GPP Mobile Interface to a
>> LAN link
>> 	Author(s)       : Cameron Byrne
>>                            Dan Drown
>>                            Ales Vizdal
>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-v6ops-64share-09.txt
>> 	Pages           : 9
>> 	Date            : 2013-10-06
>>
>> Abstract:
>>     This document describes requirements for extending an IPv6 /64 prefix
>>     from a User Equipment 3GPP radio interface to a LAN link as well as
>>     two implementation examples.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-64share
>>
>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-64share-09
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-64share-09
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the
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