Re: [vnfpool] draft-zong-vnfpool-problem-statement
"King, Daniel" <d.king@lancaster.ac.uk> Thu, 29 May 2014 19:05 UTC
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From: "King, Daniel" <d.king@lancaster.ac.uk>
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Subject: Re: [vnfpool] draft-zong-vnfpool-problem-statement
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Hi draft-zong-vnfpool-problem-statement authors, Thanks for updating the I-D, I could see a number of updates related to the discussion during/post London, which is great progress. Just have a few comments/questions/observations: Terminology - Where did you derive the term "Service Control Entity", is this an ETSI NFV term? Also once it's used/expanded, suggest using the acronym instead of full term (there are 18 instances). Introduction - It might be worth breaking the questions into bullets, rather than the current (forth) paragraph. Perhaps it has been a long day but I had to read twice to parse all the discussion points. VNF Set - Figure 2 and Figure 3 show "data conn", is this user data or signal/control data? Management Considerations - The document discusses security considerations, it might also benefit from discussion management and operational aspects as well. References - The I-D refers to the first version of the ETSI NFV White Paper, maybe update to reference the second (2013) version? Br, Dan.