[Webpush] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-webpush-encryption-08: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 16 August 2017 03:25 UTC

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Subject: [Webpush] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-webpush-encryption-08: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
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COMMENT:
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Just a few minor and editorial comments:

Substantive:

- 1: "For efficiency reasons, multiple users of Web Push often share a
   central agent that aggregates push functionality."

Is the "central agent" a push server, application server, or something else?

Editorial:

-1: "Web Push messages are the payload of an HTTP message " - Plural disagreement.

-1.1: Please consider using the boilerplate from RFC 8174.

-4, first paragraph: s/ "... some of the length..." / "... sum of the length ..."