Re: [Webpush] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-webpush-protocol-11: (with COMMENT)

"Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> Thu, 13 October 2016 00:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Webpush] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-webpush-protocol-11: (with COMMENT)
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On 12 Oct 2016, at 19:33, Martin Thomson wrote:

> On 13 October 2016 at 11:21, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:
>> But I think I now understand this to mean e2e protection, at least 
>> with
>> respect to the push service. Some clarification would help. Also, 
>> that seems
>> conceptually bound more to section 8.1 than 8. (Or was 8.1 intended 
>> to
>> expand on the mention in 8?)
>
> Yes, we should be clearer.  And yes, 8.1 was intended to expand on the
> intro to Section 8.  Now that I look at this again, it's probably
> better to move that statement to 8.1.
> I hope this helps: 
> https://github.com/webpush-wg/webpush-protocol/pull/138

That works for me.

Thanks!

Ben.