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Re: [Wish] [art] Artart early review of draft-ietf-wish-whip-08

Sergio Garcia Murillo <sergio.garcia.murillo@gmail.com> Wed, 12 July 2023 18:41 UTC

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From: Sergio Garcia Murillo <sergio.garcia.murillo@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 12 Jul 2023 20:41:07 +0200
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To: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org>
Cc: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>, art@ietf.org, draft-ietf-wish-whip.all@ietf.org, wish@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Wish] [art] Artart early review of draft-ietf-wish-whip-08
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Thank you Carsten and Barry, the examples have been very insightful.

I have added the following text wich based on the one on the RFC 9256:
https://github.com/wish-wg/webrtc-http-ingest-protocol/commit/4ccd1f26c29d1d40acf923d1bbf76daab1b21397

What do you think?
Sergio

On Mon, Jul 10, 2023 at 6:38 PM Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> wrote:

> On 2023-07-10, at 18:33, Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> wrote:
> >
> >> On the detailed side:
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> And of course the mother of all expert reviewer instructions:
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> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9053#section-10.4
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> To counter-balance this,
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> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9352#section-11.3-2
>
> Grüße, Carsten
>
>

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