Re: [Wish] [art] Artart early review of draft-ietf-wish-whip-08
Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Wed, 12 July 2023 19:02 UTC
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From: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
Date: Wed, 12 Jul 2023 15:01:26 -0400
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To: Sergio Garcia Murillo <sergio.garcia.murillo@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Wish] [art] Artart early review of draft-ietf-wish-whip-08
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That looks good to me, Sergio. Thanks again for addressing my comments! Barry On Wed, Jul 12, 2023 at 2:41 PM Sergio Garcia Murillo <sergio.garcia.murillo@gmail.com> wrote: > > Thank you Carsten and Barry, the examples have been very insightful. > > I have added the following text wich based on the one on the RFC 9256: > https://github.com/wish-wg/webrtc-http-ingest-protocol/commit/4ccd1f26c29d1d40acf923d1bbf76daab1b21397 > > What do you think? > Sergio > > On Mon, Jul 10, 2023 at 6:38 PM Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> wrote: >> >> On 2023-07-10, at 18:33, Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> wrote: >> > >> >> On the detailed side: >> >> And of course the mother of all expert reviewer instructions: >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9053#section-10.4 >> >> To counter-balance this, >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9352#section-11.3-2 >> >> Grüße, Carsten >>
- [Wish] Artart early review of draft-ietf-wish-whi… Barry Leiba via Datatracker
- Re: [Wish] [art] Artart early review of draft-iet… Barry Leiba
- Re: [Wish] Artart early review of draft-ietf-wish… Sergio Garcia Murillo
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- Re: [Wish] Artart early review of draft-ietf-wish… Sergio Garcia Murillo
- Re: [Wish] Artart early review of draft-ietf-wish… Barry Leiba
- Re: [Wish] [art] Artart early review of draft-iet… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [Wish] [art] Artart early review of draft-iet… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [Wish] [art] Artart early review of draft-iet… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [Wish] [art] Artart early review of draft-iet… Sergio Garcia Murillo
- Re: [Wish] Artart early review of draft-ietf-wish… Sergio Garcia Murillo
- Re: [Wish] [art] Artart early review of draft-iet… Barry Leiba