[Wish] Lars Eggert's No Objection on charter-ietf-wish-01-00: (with COMMENT)

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Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-wish-01-00: No Objection

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# GEN AD review of charter-ietf-wish-01-00

CC @larseggert

## Comments

### "HTTPAPI", paragraph 5
```
  Dec 2024 - Submit WebRTC-HTTP egress protocol to IESG for publication
```
Add expected RFC type?

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool) so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### Grammar/style

#### "HTTPAPI", paragraph 1
```
ation (telephony, video conferencing etc), adding explicit protocol support f
                                     ^^^
```
A period is needed after the abbreviation "etc.".

## Notes

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