Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 files

Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> Thu, 18 July 2019 06:35 UTC

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Subject: Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 files
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On 18.07.2019 08:19, Sandy Ginoza wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> As you know, the transition to XMLv3 is quickly approaching.  As part of our preparation, the RPC is  converting some XMLv2 files to XMLv3.  We’re hoping some of you will take the time to review the files and provide feedback regarding whether the updates are as expected and the XMLv3 files are considered “good” v3 files.
>
> A couple of notes:
> - we focused on format only; we did not make editorial updates.
> - the diff files compare the initial v2v3 output with the files we edited.
>
> Please review the following files:
>
> 1) draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc
> https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11.txt
>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3.html
 > ...


In
<https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3.html#name-authors-addresses>,
I see lines only containing commas. Somethings wrong with address
rendering...

Best regards, Julian