Re: [xml2rfc-dev] [v3] Please help review v3 files

"Martin Thomson" <mt@lowentropy.net> Wed, 07 August 2019 03:13 UTC

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Date: Wed, 07 Aug 2019 13:13:43 +1000
From: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
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Subject: Re: [xml2rfc-dev] [v3] Please help review v3 files
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On Wed, Aug 7, 2019, at 07:03, Henrik Levkowetz wrote:
> These figures are plain artwork. I've tested adding this CSS after the
> a.pilcrow {} stanza:
> 
>  .artwork .pilcrow {
>  float: right;
>  }
> 
> and moving the pilcrow up before the <pre>; that gives a pilcrow to the
> right of the artwork, without reducing the artwork width. Would that
> work for you?

What I did instead (and you can see that here: https://martinthomson.github.io/i-d-template/sample2.html#section-appendix.a-26) is make <pre> outside of <figure> use inline-block.  I'd use flexbox, but apparently that isn't available.

There's lots of reasons not to use float, and keeping the pilcrow after the paragraph is better from a content-model perspective.